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 Plutonic
Author: Lloyd (---.sls.bc.ca)
Date:   05-27-04 23:47

Disco ball shimmer, dance floor creeping.
She told me she loved me, She told me
She was sorry. She wanted to hold me.
Bump bump of the bass,Thump thump
Of my beat. She got me in the grip. I was
In love, she was in love, but not with me.
I knew, she knew, together we knew.
It was plutonic, it'd be a freind if not all.

Her smile, her persona, her everything.
I loved every single itty bitty thing. She
Could melt me, The only girl I cared for.
Is this destiny, or puppy?


^^
work in progress

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 Re: Plutonic
Author: Johnny SansCulo (---.nycmny83.covad.net)
Date:   05-28-04 09:09

Deeper meanings through the inadvertant use of plutonic

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 Re: Plutonic
Author: lg (---.trlck.ca.charter.com)
Date:   05-28-04 11:53

Space love, especially plutonic, is much deeper I agree, Johnny.


Les

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 Re: Plutonic
Author: Johnny SansCulo (---.nycmny83.covad.net)
Date:   05-28-04 12:21

Maybe they're just being igneous

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 Re: Plutonic
Author: lg (---.trlck.ca.charter.com)
Date:   05-28-04 12:47

I hate to be Mickey Mouse about this, but it could be Puppyesque.


Les

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 Re: Plutonic
Author: Johnny SansCulo (---.nycmny83.covad.net)
Date:   05-28-04 13:04

Hey....Union Rules ! I'm the one who's supposed to act Goofy !

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 Re: Plutonic
Author: Jack? (12.46.184.---)
Date:   05-28-04 13:41

Act?

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 Re: Plutonic
Author: Johnny SansCulo (---.nycmny83.covad.net)
Date:   05-28-04 13:55

Watch it Buster or I'll use the Axe of the Apostles on you !

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 Re: Plutonic
Author: K.Q. (212.118.31.---)
Date:   05-29-04 03:52

A dream unfulfilled is a dream that is still live. That is in your benefit; trust me!

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