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Old Thoughts
Posted by: Broken Silence (---.202-68.tampabay.rr.com)
Date: March 28, 2022 09:07PM

Seeping tears of saddened joy
Streaming down the pale white face
No sobs heard during the weep
Spinning around, look at the sky
Spreading wings but cannot fly
Where ever gone and left to go
Stingy hopes of feeling life
Summer sun strokes of curled hair
Reverberating membrance of that night
Strangly clear like water in the light
Some where are the broken truth
Never again to be told
Sold out hopes and ended days
Swimming in a pool of mingled dreams
These are the images seeping through the seams


Re: Old Thoughts
Posted by: J.H.SUMMERS (---.chartertn.net)
Date: March 28, 2022 09:16PM

Broken Silence,

"Swimming in a pool of mingled dreams." Very nice.

john


Re: Old Thoughts
Posted by: K.Q. (---.nets.com.jo)
Date: March 29, 2022 05:07AM

Beautiful imagery!


Re: Old Thoughts
Posted by: Broken Silence (---.202-68.tampabay.rr.com)
Date: March 30, 2022 06:26PM

heh. Thanks.


Re: Old Thoughts
Posted by: les712 (68.185.64.---)
Date: May 12, 2022 04:29PM

bump


Re: Old Thoughts
Posted by: Fickledlife (72.130.17.---)
Date: February 28, 2022 06:10PM

seeping tears.

no sobs heard during the weep

spreading wings but cannot fly

swimming in a pool of mingled dreams




points up those are "the images seeping through the seams"

nice.. help me bring this forum back to life!

-with love




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