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Hammering Out Wings
Posted by: Percival (---.humboldt1.com)
Date: July 02, 2021 09:03PM

Looking on a world I dream collapse
Relapsing old ways of far off darken days
As I leave with weapons strapped I pray
... please, fly today .....
Remove for me their bowels and their backs
Take their legs and please attack
Kill the rest if they fight back.

Counsel the demons and use them too
God will send angels to see you thru
Wait for speed before you go

And if you do,
The world.
For you~



Post Edited (07-02-03 20:13)


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Re: Hammering Out Wings
Posted by: -Les- (---.trlck.ca.charter.com)
Date: July 02, 2021 09:10PM

This one reminds me of some medieval fantasy. Interesting read.

Les


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Re: Hammering Out Wings
Posted by: wicked (---.nas10.nashville1.tn.us.da.qwest.net)
Date: July 04, 2021 09:00PM



Love it.

~wicked~


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Re: Hammering Out Wings
Posted by: Percival (---.humboldt1.com)
Date: July 05, 2021 07:35PM

Thank you again


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Re: Hammering Out Wings
Posted by: les712 (68.185.64.---)
Date: May 11, 2022 10:21PM

bump


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Re: Hammering Out Wings
Posted by: les712 (68.185.64.---)
Date: May 14, 2022 11:08AM

Here you go Percival, flame on...
This show is not on my radar, but I found it on YouTube:




Les


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