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not what you seem
Posted by: Human Error (---.tmsrvo01.nj.comcast.net)
Date: March 17, 2022 01:28AM

you are my rose
you bring comfort and light to my world
from a distance you are beautiful
as i near your beauty grows
your fragrance fills the air around me
and my senses long for more
you glisten, you shine

as i come closer
you beckon me closer still to you
i am in awe of radiant shine
i reach out to touch you
and like all roses, when i reach you... ... ...
you tear my flesh, and i bleed
in pain, i step away

i look to you in question
as a rose, you do not make a move
still, in beauty, you lay wait
i near you again, in blind faith
with eyes as wide open as closed can be
you do not know what you do
and again i bleed
ive blead for you before, and again i bleed...and this is what hope i find.


Re: not what you seem
Posted by: les712 (68.185.64.---)
Date: May 11, 2022 09:55PM

Good one, error.

Les




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