User Submitted Poetry
 Interested in feedback about a piece you've written? 

eMule -> The Poetry Archive -> Forums -> User Submitted Poetry


Goto Thread: PreviousNext
Goto: Forum ListMessage ListNew TopicSearchLog In
A Motive
Posted by: BlueFreak (---.proxy.aol.com)
Date: March 07, 2022 04:43PM

A Motive

Pathetic anger,
Consumed by one's soul.
Drinking adn eating it,
To make them Feel whole.

Repressed and closed in,
Holding it down.
Swimming in painfulness,
Until they drown.

Hateful ambition,
A murderous drive,
Sparing no souls,
To keep them alive.


Re: A Motive
Posted by: les712 (68.185.83.---)
Date: July 17, 2021 02:34PM

Good one, Blue. The motive is mob mentality, or might makes right, which is very often wrong.


Les


Re: A Motive
Posted by: petersz (69.181.22.---)
Date: July 18, 2021 12:51AM

I like the way you structured this.

Peter




Sorry, only registered users may post in this forum.
This poetry forum at emule.com powered by Phorum.