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Posted by: xiimix (---.tybout01.de.comcast.net)
Date: March 04, 2022 10:58AM
speakers spew
lights flash
screaming aloud
scroll lock end crash
the fire will consume us all
so help bring them
raveging raven eyes
peircing mechanical cries
cant you see
all the white skies
all the white lies?
The poem
Posted by: Holding Mercury (---.proxy.aol.com)
Date: March 04, 2022 11:06AM
Very confusing, and it seems like it needs one more line at the end:
speakers spew
lights flash
screaming aloud
scroll lock end crash
the fire will consume us all
so help bring them
raveging raven eyes
peircing mechanical cries
cant you see
all the white skies
all the white lies?
Watch where it lies
As this beast slowley dies.
(Just a option) 
Cheers!
-Oxide Slain
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