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Dance of Words
Posted by: SEACowles (---.net297.fl.sprint-hsd.net)
Date: February 26, 2022 01:16AM

The dance of words across the page
Thrills me more than I can say.

The flying, flashing thoughts
Boomber-spearing, thunderously.

The dull, torpid lumber of stomping,
Black emotion.

Heavy, and placid.
Heady, and pungent.

The diaphanous indifference, pomping
Wind-swept egos.

The grind-sweat induction,
Humping happiness.

Oh, God! Who dare deem this world
Anything less than pure poetry!

SEACowles


Re: Dance of Words
Posted by: lgreen (---.client.attbi.com)
Date: February 26, 2022 01:21AM

Bravo!!

Ell


Re: Dance of Words
Posted by: JP (---.tnt1.rochelle.il.da.uu.net)
Date: February 27, 2022 12:24PM

Echo!

JP


Re: Dance of Words
Posted by: Sarah_Ann (76.253.108.---)
Date: March 08, 2022 07:14PM

Another wonderful piece! I love this! (bump, winking smiley )


Re: Dance of Words
Posted by: les712 (68.116.88.---)
Date: March 11, 2022 02:36PM

I like this S.C., especially the closing lines.

Les




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