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White Water
Posted by: Joey Smoke (---.pfizer.com)
Date: May 28, 2022 10:47AM

White Water

Primed to succeed,
in the early stages,
rip roaring,
flushing,
the white rapid rages,
relentlessly down the mountain
the stone washed away,
then carried along
in the white water fray,
energy,
zest
and a quick darting smile,
runs through your thoughts,
like the jewel on the Nile,

join the old river as time saunters on, enjoy youthful fountains, cause soon they’ll be gone


Re: White Water
Posted by: les712 (68.116.90.---)
Date: June 19, 2022 06:43PM

Very nicely done, Joey.

Les




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