Frozen tears

Frozen tears upon my cheek
And a dagger in my heart
Your coldness froze the tears
And you words were the dagger
The tears may melt
but the dagger left a scar
that will never fade.



A dreamer's love

Sparkling stars in the night's velvet sky
I kiss my love so softly goodbye
For soon the sun will chase darkness away
and I will awake to a brand new day
For only in dreams my love and I meet
but are parted at the night's painful retreat.

Those poems are really good, short yet sweet thats cool,I can kinda know what you mean with that poem, frozen tears, i know how you feel bro!!!Amd the second one, yeah.....they are really good.....well thats all I have to say so.................................happy writings..........bye!!!!