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My Prayer
Posted by: James Daniels (---.proxy.aol.com)
Date: May 22, 2022 03:06AM

Now I lay me down to sleep
I pray the lord my soul to keep
Please do not win me before my time
My feelings need time to vent
They utter words that rhyme

I know it’s been a long time
I know I haven’t been of much service
My mind had become kind of diverted
So that made me really nervous

It is you who gives me breathe
and I’m gratified for everyone
that I take
So please forgive me,
when these my heart-felt confessions I attempt to make

Dear Journal, I have a terrible secret, and deep down in my heart I know you're the only one that can keep it....

"Dear Journal,..." by James Daniels coming 6/7/8? 2002


Re: My Prayer
Posted by: Korin (---.proxy.aol.com)
Date: May 24, 2022 03:29AM

Is there anymore to go with this? Beacuse I'd love to read it right NOW! Okay sorry had to get that out. I liked it, captivates you, makes you want to know what the secret is. So any more installments, unless you've alread put them out there and I haven't found it yet. In that case I'll just stop talking. Thanks. Nice read. I'm done now, I promise.




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