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eat me damnit
Posted by: albert meyburgh (---.bc.hsia.telus.net)
Date: May 20, 2022 03:43AM

scorched earth, mountains high
stars ablaze, vibrant sky
rivers flowing, tides in ebb
winds are blowing, sands are dead
forever yearning, tastes so sweet
forever learning, i'm yours to eat

-by me! yay me!
albert meyburgh


Re: eat me damnit
Posted by: silent siren (---.ber.dial.de.colt.net)
Date: May 26, 2022 05:45PM

???
Okay, could be it depends on me fool being German, but what is here to be eaten by whom?!
siren, who appreciates your abilities as a fine and good critic




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