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acceptance
Posted by: albert meyburgh (---.bc.hsia.telus.net)
Date: May 20, 2022 03:40AM

a material illusion in this lucid dream i call my life,
churning, burning, our love riddled with strife.
softly, gently stroking the air of my soul,
scraping away at my bleeding heart covered in coal.
it bleeds forgivingly, a blood of contempt,
compassionate judgement wishing repent.
truth and trust mingling in time,
doubting belief in this short ryhme.

-by me! yay me!
Albert Meyburgh


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Pretty poem
Posted by: Ariana (---.valleyint.com)
Date: May 20, 2022 07:13AM

Wow, I really like your poem. All of them..they range from simple talk about a lemon to this poem..and they all have such a nice rhythm. I can't wait to hear more...


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Re: Pretty poem
Posted by: albert meyburgh (---.bc.hsia.telus.net)
Date: May 20, 2022 05:02PM

hehe, thanks! I'm so happy someone likes them...! =)


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