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Amazingly wonderful!
Posted by: kudut (---.ipt.aol.com)
Date: May 18, 2022 11:42AM

kudut

Amazingly wonderful!

I've seen it all before,

The dragon's breath upon my lips

I was, but am no more.



To kiss a dragon smoothly

Requires dilligence and grace.

But be too quick, and you will find

On your skull, a crispy face!



5/9/02

kudut


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Re: Amazingly wonderful!
Posted by: Fly (66.138.1.---)
Date: May 18, 2022 09:44PM

OH, short and very well done!!


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Re: Amazingly wonderful!
Posted by: LadybugMary (---.ELRA.splitrock.net)
Date: May 19, 2022 11:02PM

kudut
I've always enjoyed dragon poems and yours had a hot twist!
Images came across quite clear! :-)

Mary...aka Ladybug


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Re: Amazingly wonderful!
Posted by: albert meyburgh (---.bc.hsia.telus.net)
Date: May 20, 2022 04:00AM

... for some reason when i read this poem , i visualize a guy smoking opium.. weirdness.


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Re: Amazingly wonderful!
Posted by: silent siren (---.ber.dial.de.colt.net)
Date: May 26, 2022 05:42PM

Hahaaaa! Kudut, this is it! I expected something stiff and beautiful, and you let it all fall back in the end. That's humour like Heine had...
siren


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