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Going Home
Posted by: JP (---.essex1.com)
Date: May 17, 2022 02:18AM

The road winds on like a ribbon
Under the pale moon's ghostly glare,
The trees wave their eerie fingers
And the deer lift their heads to stir.

Strains of a haunting melody
Twists in tendrils around my soul,
The voice of a long dead tenor
Lives again in his final role.

The years roll away unbidden
As the memories cling to my heart,
The music swells to crescendo
And the tears are aching to start.

Where is the promise of surcease
From sorrow, betrayal and lies,
"Love above all is the answer"
A voice from the darkness replies.

"I loved you from the beginning
'Twas your folly, kept us apart,
The peace I promise, is endless
If you let me into your heart."


Re: Going Home
Posted by: JP (---.essex1.com)
Date: May 17, 2022 02:44AM

typo-should read "the deer lift their heads to stare"


Re: Going Home
Posted by: LadybugMary (---.ELRA.splitrock.net)
Date: May 18, 2022 02:13AM

JP
Sometimes the beauty of love is letting go. I enjoyed your poem,
a bit bitterly sweet!

Mary...aka Ladybug


Re: Going Home
Posted by: Fly (66.138.1.---)
Date: May 18, 2022 09:08AM

LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!


Re: Going Home
Posted by: silent siren (---.ber.dial.de.colt.net)
Date: May 26, 2022 06:12PM

Dear JP,

of course I've got to love that one also for mentioning music smiling smiley. Simply tell, who was that tenor you quote? Caruso? I'm a little specialist, try me. Perhps I can share that song with you.

silent (therefor sighing) siren


Re: Going Home
Posted by: JP (207.43.74.---)
Date: May 27, 2022 02:33AM

I thought this up going home from work one night, a long time ago. I don't exactly remember the name of the tenor, I love them all, and often belt out opera in my car.




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