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Know how I feel
Posted by: kiki (---.dialsprint.net)
Date: May 13, 2022 05:56PM

Can you fulfill my every wish,
my every need and desire?
I want you to know my passion,
the heat of my fire.

I know you want me
to do these things for you.
Trust me sweetheart,
so anything I will, for you.

Just call me when
you need someone there.
I'll never leave your side,
I'll always want you, always care.

Let me know how
you want it to be.
You've got control of me now
never again, I'll want to be free.


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Re: Know how I feel
Posted by: Britty (---.proxy.aol.com)
Date: May 22, 2022 08:17PM

That poem was awesome! I can relate very much! thanx!!! ~britty


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Re: Know how I feel
Posted by: silent siren (---.ber.dial.de.colt.net)
Date: May 26, 2022 05:20PM

Simply good...that's Unterwerfung!
siren


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