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More than I did before
Posted by: kiki (---.edutech.org)
Date: May 13, 2022 11:06AM

Late at night I sleep,
I think of you and me.
I dream about us and how
our future is going to be.

I wait again for the day
I can be held in your embrace.
To feel your warm, sweet kisses
laid gently upon my face.

To hold you in my arms
and feel your loving touch.
To hear you whisper in my ear,
"I want you, I need you, I love you so much"

I love you with my heart,
my soul and so much more.
I want you forever, I always have,
But more than I ever did before.


Re: More than I did before
Posted by: jazzy (---.charternc.net)
Date: May 13, 2022 11:43AM



Hi Kiki, smiling smiley

Nice romantic verse! Your tender, deep feelings and emotions are conveyed quite effectively, and I'm sure to whomever they are directed would have to be truly smitten and impressed! smiling smiley Can't help but wonder if you have more to share, maybe, along this line? It'd definitely be a treat! winking smiley

Namaste,
Jazzy


Re: More than I did before
Posted by: kiki (---.dialsprint.net)
Date: May 13, 2022 05:53PM

Hi, yes I have MANY more poems that I will soon be posting! So keep an eye out for them! Thank you for the compliment too.
kiki




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