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a poem
Posted by: love boat (---.pc.ashlandfiber.net)
Date: May 12, 2022 10:24PM

Afoot this tall tree
amongst a heavenly escape
i am angelic.
The bodies around me are shed
with a beauty not often seen.
the wind moves slow
as do the voices
in this alcove of beauty
in a world stricken with
unfathomable crap.


Re: a poem
Posted by: Darragh Halpin (---.pfizer.com)
Date: May 13, 2022 12:51PM

Hello there,
Like your poem a lot. I often write about escaping into "heavenly" nature myself. There is no doubt that nature is a saviour of the soul, the same soul that suffers in this “unfathomable crap” we face every day. Are you specifically talking about heaven here or is it more a “heavenly nature” to which you refer?
Cheers,
djh

djh


Re: a poem
Posted by: love boat (---.pc.ashlandfiber.net)
Date: May 13, 2022 11:33PM

when i wrote this, i was in a place where the sun made its way through the trees in beams one could see, and people all in their own space were glowing. and although right downtown, it was hidden from the hustle. All one could hear were the birds, the waterfalls and their own thoughts. i regained my innocence that day for a moment.
evian


Re: a poem
Posted by: love boat (---.pc.ashlandfiber.net)
Date: May 13, 2022 11:34PM

when i wrote this, i was in a place where the sun made its way through the trees in beams one could see, and people all in their own space were glowing. and although right downtown, it was hidden from the hustle. All one could hear were the birds, the waterfalls and their own thoughts. i regained my innocence that day for a moment.
evian




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