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Haiku ll
Posted by: jazzy (---.charternc.net)
Date: May 09, 2022 07:33PM



_____O(de)2 You_____

want, needing you so
like precious breath to go on
breathing - your sweet love!!!


Re: Haiku ll
Posted by: LadybugMary (---.ELRA.splitrock.net)
Date: May 11, 2022 12:53AM

Jazzy,
Interesting title....and great use of Haiku!

Mary...aka Ladybug


Re: Haiku ll
Posted by: jazzy (---.charternc.net)
Date: May 11, 2022 03:46PM



Mary, always nice to receive your positive affirmations! Thanks! smiling smiley

jazzy




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