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The shape I'm in
Posted by: kudut (---.enss264.t3.ans.net)
Date: May 09, 2022 01:23PM

Never came back
to the shape I was in

I thought, with a grin,
"I'm too big to begin!"

But I started to diet,
and I lost the weight.

Now when people see me,
they say, "You look great!"

kudut


Re: The shape I'm in
Posted by: jazzy (---.charternc.net)
Date: May 09, 2022 01:52PM



congrats on both your weight loss and marking of it by celebration thru poetry! smiling smiley


Re: The shape I'm in
Posted by: LadybugMary (---.ELRA.splitrock.net)
Date: May 11, 2022 12:57AM

Kudut,
Congrads and may you always be in the shape you are in to be the
best you!

Mary...aka Ladybug


Re: The shape I'm in
Posted by: Fly (66.138.1.---)
Date: May 18, 2022 09:07AM

Great job!!!!! and congrats !!!!!!smiling smiley


Re: The shape I'm in
Posted by: ken udut (---.ipt.aol.com)
Date: May 18, 2022 11:34AM

Thanks guys smiling smiley I lost 35 lbs, and have been mostly sticking to it for a few months now.


Re: The shape I'm in
Posted by: albert meyburgh (---.bc.hsia.telus.net)
Date: May 20, 2022 04:02AM

ezweightloss == vegan


Re: The shape I'm in
Posted by: silent siren (---.ber.dial.de.colt.net)
Date: May 26, 2022 05:37PM

funny!




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