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Pine and Oak and Maple
Posted by: petersz (67.174.198.---)
Date: June 27, 2021 05:51PM

Pine and Oak and Maple

April to August
Sunrise to dusk
You and I and him and her
Can we enumerate the particulars
Here and now?
Perhaps not. Perhaps
The generalities stand in the way
Of clear perception
The moon feels left out
A handful of truths. Besides
The morning is old again.


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Re: Pine and Oak and Maple
Posted by: petersz (67.174.198.---)
Date: June 27, 2021 06:19PM

This is a metaphor for home.


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Re: Pine and Oak and Maple
Posted by: les712 (68.185.68.---)
Date: June 29, 2021 08:49AM

Everything is colored by previous experience Peter, a good read here.


Les


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Re: Pine and Oak and Maple
Posted by: frost42_24 (67.160.36.---)
Date: June 29, 2021 07:42PM

The moon feels left out
A handful of truths

my favorite elements


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Re: Pine and Oak and Maple
Posted by: petersz (67.174.198.---)
Date: June 29, 2021 08:49PM

Thank you both for visiting. You often add enough to my poems to make me want to write more.

Amo et avanti,

Peter


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