I am focused
but you don’t realize
looking at you
is like zooming in
for a tight shot
through the lens
my cap off
ready to capture
that perfect moment
first a pause
followed by
years of waiting
delayed flash
to darkness
and you never turn to smile…
Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 06/25/2011 08:01PM by frost42_24.
Nicely done, Frosty, I like the twist at the end.
Les
thanks, Les and Peter.
Nice.
This sort of encompasses a captured moment poem in a captured moment poem, clever!