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Today:
Posted by: petersz (67.174.198.---)
Date: June 20, 2022 06:38PM

Today:

Not a pattern
For future behaviour…
A variation
On a theme.


Re: Today:
Posted by: les712 (68.116.80.---)
Date: June 22, 2022 12:21PM

Without a pattern, there is no theme. Nice little ditty here, Peter, write more.

Les


Re: Today:
Posted by: petersz (67.174.198.---)
Date: June 22, 2022 02:14PM

Les,

odd how 'pattern' means 'thematic' as well as 'projection'. I the first line a pattern would be a plan, or a template. so today is not something to model tomorrow on. The last two lines are of a musical mind, hence when I change keys or transpose themes, the emphasis is on how tomorrow can be different from today rather than be patterned on today. All through, a difference of emphasis that doesn't exclude your comment.

thanks for the note,

amo et avanti,

Peter




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