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Song Fragment: Little Apple
Posted by: petersz (67.174.198.---)
Date: June 06, 2022 04:16AM

Song Fragment: Little Apple

Weight trimmed, return from the haft
Light opens into reflection,
Steel, braid to braid,
shallow filled to surface,
Brush by the mirror, silhouette retreats
And before my blood water rises
The pommel flat to body


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Re: Song Fragment: Little Apple
Posted by: les712 (68.116.94.---)
Date: June 08, 2022 12:58PM

Nicely done, Peter. I'm sure Bruce would like this one.

Les


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Re: Song Fragment: Little Apple
Posted by: petersz (67.174.198.---)
Date: June 09, 2022 03:08AM

Les
Thanks, Les. I was also thinking of 210, our Mexican Cowboy.

Peter


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