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Lakshmi
Posted by: petersz (67.174.198.---)
Date: May 13, 2022 01:41AM

Lakshmi

She ran her hand
Over my bare head --
Once:
The most sensual act.

I am still happy
Every day
I know her….
See her…
Hear her voice.


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Re: Lakshmi
Posted by: les712 (68.116.88.---)
Date: May 13, 2022 10:29AM

The emotional attachment fed only by a touch from the opposite sex is apparent here.

Les


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Re: Lakshmi
Posted by: petersz (67.174.198.---)
Date: May 13, 2022 10:38AM

strange, isn't it? Thanks for visiting, Les. I posted this here and on Home Away From Home because I wanted both you and Mary to see it.

Peter


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Re: Lakshmi
Posted by: frost42_24 (67.160.36.---)
Date: June 24, 2021 04:21PM

Powerful, indeed.


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Re: Lakshmi
Posted by: petersz (67.174.198.---)
Date: June 25, 2021 12:58AM

Life can be powerful.


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Re: Lakshmi
Posted by: frost42_24 (67.160.36.---)
Date: June 25, 2021 01:09AM

I know...and sometimes the subtle things are the most gripping...ahhh. It's so wonderful.


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