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Posted by: frost42_24 (67.160.36.---)
Date: March 23, 2022 11:55AM

tender night
the insecurities
of the moon
for only feeling
half there
are comforted
by your quiet
stillness

and though
I know
I should rest
every part
of me stirs

there's such electricity
in peace
and all that's possible
for the black sky
slate to write upon

and my story
is not so different
from all before
and those who
will follow

so surely we are tied
this tender night...

Life is full of possibilities and the thrill of the unknown is so great.


Re: connection
Posted by: les712 (68.116.89.---)
Date: March 25, 2022 12:23PM

Nicely done, Sherrie.

Les


Re: connection
Posted by: Fickledlife (72.130.17.---)
Date: March 26, 2022 03:38PM

"Life is full of possibilities and the thrill of the unknown is so great."

thats why I, along with so many others, are in love with life. thanks for articulating that so well.

-with love


Re: connection
Posted by: frost42_24 (67.160.36.---)
Date: March 28, 2022 02:57PM

Thanks, Les.

Fickledlife, thanks. That was my signature line but in looking at it, it does look like part of the poem smiling smiley From one in love with lifer to the other, thanks.




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