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Priming
Posted by: frost42_24 (67.160.36.---)
Date: March 23, 2022 11:35AM

this thought
can you feel it?

I am ever
with you

distance,
this illusion

we are one
we are one

our time is now
to long for foolish things


Re: Priming
Posted by: petersz (98.207.174.---)
Date: March 23, 2022 04:57PM

Ezra Pound said in the Cantos, "How is it far/ If you think of it?" - referring to his memory of the one's he loved...they live in our memory...which is not a trivial thing.

I love the simplicity of your poem...as so often, you go right to the heart of the matter.

Thanks,


amo et avanti,

Peter


Re: Priming
Posted by: frost42_24 (67.160.36.---)
Date: March 23, 2022 05:01PM

Peter thanks for taking the time and for the feedback.

Sherry


Re: Priming
Posted by: les712 (68.116.89.---)
Date: March 27, 2022 11:37AM

What is "foolish"? I like this short poem, Frosty, write more.


Les


Re: Priming
Posted by: frost42_24 (67.160.36.---)
Date: March 28, 2022 02:54PM

Thanks, Les. I'm trying. I've been so plugged up but it's starting to unclog. Slowly but surely. Thanks for the support.

As to what is foolish...that IS the question smiling smiley


Re: Priming
Posted by: les712 (68.185.71.---)
Date: April 04, 2022 01:25AM

People, including posters on this forum are always asking me questions like this: "Where do you get inspiration for writing?"

Inspiration is everywhere. For anyone out there looking to find inspiration look around you. You might be amazed at what you see. Go to the following page and click on "full screen":

[www.youtube.com] />

Les

Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 04/04/2022 03:52AM by les712.


Re: Priming
Posted by: Fickledlife (72.130.17.---)
Date: April 04, 2022 01:32AM

im gonna butt in a moment and insist on this piece as well as the one Les shared.


[www.youtube.com]

-with love


Re: Priming
Posted by: frost42_24 (67.160.36.---)
Date: April 19, 2022 06:26PM

Both are great. Thanks to you both.




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