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An online dating message to impress after initial contact.
Posted by: larkinabout (86.158.157.---)
Date: March 08, 2022 10:36PM

Hey you,

I’m nearly 40, half alive
but since you asked me
to be true - here it is
from me to you:

Your typing thrills me
like a possible plane death

I like your face from the left

You aksed me:
“What it is I want” - at the time a 99 with a flake
and a spin on a dime, you didn’t reply.

So here is the truth:
I want you, but different.

Can you change?

Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 03/08/2021 10:42PM by larkinabout.


Re: An online dating message to impress after initial contact.
Posted by: petersz (98.207.174.---)
Date: March 09, 2022 03:47AM

wo-o, nice turn

Peter


Re: An online dating message to impress after initial contact.
Posted by: Fickledlife (72.130.17.---)
Date: March 10, 2022 01:24AM

I never have understood the online dating thing... it seems so impersonal. like a doppleganger of the real person youre talking to. idk.. thoughts on this?

-with love




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