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short poems
Posted by: larkinabout (86.158.157.---)
Date: March 08, 2022 10:23PM

Fox

He visited again, I enjoy him.
I like his drawn face, his
exactness...

Not a moment wasted. He thinks
beyond his feet, he
dances.

Ode to Emily

. -- .. .-.. -.-- / -.. .. -.-. -.- .. -. ... --- -. /

.-- .- ... / .... . .-. . .-.-.- .-.-.- .-.-.-

Seagull sorrow

The way a gull
Let loose on me
No longer full
From a lampost tree
Has allowed my mind
Much lighter thoughts
Those once confined
Are led to ought...

Edited 3 time(s). Last edit at 03/08/2021 10:27PM by larkinabout.


Re: short poems
Posted by: petersz (98.207.174.---)
Date: March 09, 2022 03:45AM

Like the pace as usual...and I like the coice both of words and attitude.

Thanks,

Peter


Re: short poems
Posted by: les712 (68.116.88.---)
Date: March 10, 2022 08:29PM

Seagull sorrow is perhaps your best effort of those I've read. Kudos on these two little gems.

Les


Re: short poems
Posted by: larkinabout (86.158.157.---)
Date: March 11, 2022 07:18PM

Thanks Peter and Les.

I look back now on the early years I spent here, and think what a complete cock I was!

That said, I see the attitude and the despondency in many a new writer whilst touring the forums, it's laughable really!

Shame this place has almost diminished! Every other time I try to log on it's the same old database problem...

Hello Johnny and the like, I think of you fondly, but not often, obviously...

K x


Re: short poems
Posted by: Sarah_Ann (76.253.106.---)
Date: March 12, 2022 05:19AM

I like the simplicity and the sincerity of these pieces. smiling smiley




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