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The Solipsist in the Crack in the Wall
Posted by: petersz (98.207.174.---)
Date: March 08, 2022 09:55PM

The Solipsist in the Crack in the Wall

I don’t live in that world.
The world where everybody is famous
In their own world.

I look at the pictures in the book
For my face
For a glimpse of myself
In the café
On the street
Looking back at the camera
But I’m not there.

Why do I waste my energy looking
For such an absurd image
When I have my own absurdities
To contemplate?

The admission
That the sentence has no ending
Until it is complete
And I leave it behind.

The recognition
That my world ends
Almost before it begins
Every time.

The disturbing understanding
That no one else knows what I know
And that it hardly matters
Even to me.


Re: The Solipsist in the Crack in the Wall
Posted by: larkinabout (86.158.157.---)
Date: March 08, 2022 10:26PM

15 mins has now expanded...

Good poem x


Re: The Solipsist in the Crack in the Wall
Posted by: petersz (98.207.174.---)
Date: March 09, 2022 03:43AM

thanks, Camus. I tried it out at the reading Jessica Loos and I did tonight, and it actually turned out to be listenable.

Always good to see you around,

amo et avanti,

Peter


Re: The Solipsist in the Crack in the Wall
Posted by: les712 (68.116.88.---)
Date: March 10, 2022 11:54AM

Peter, you could write a book about this poem; one of your best in my opinion.


Les


Re: The Solipsist in the Crack in the Wall
Posted by: petersz (98.207.174.---)
Date: March 10, 2022 11:05PM

Now, Les, you know my preference is to write the poem about my topic instead of the book about it.

Thanks for visiting, as usual,

amo et avanti,

Peter




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