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Fairytales
Posted by: Fickledlife (72.130.17.---)
Date: February 20, 2022 12:37AM

Everywhere I look its 'the beautiful are the good'... 

thought this way.. It happened by accident, it was subliminal,

The underpayment for good and kind actions is nothin less than criminal,

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Friar Lawrence was a man of God still unbehaved,

A princess sometimes just feels like being saved,

She wants prince charming to run through a course for her forlorn,
 
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The old friar? helped because he was once the lover torn,  

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The wicked witch was not always wicked,   

Prince charming worries too much of his hair,

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The charm behind it is an image, 

And For the witch it was her lover who brought upon her despair,

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The beautiful and the good...ha.  
Its the good who are beautiful.
 
 

-with love

Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 02/26/2011 07:49PM by Fickledlife.


Re: Fairytales
Posted by: les712 (68.185.70.---)
Date: March 30, 2022 12:36PM

Everywhere I look its the beautiful are the good...
thought this way.. It happened by accident, it was subliminal,
The underpaymentfor good and kind actions
is nothin less than criminal,

Friar Lawrence was a man of God still unbehaved,
A princess sometimes just feels like being saved,
She wants prince charming to run through a course for her forlorn,
The old friar? helped because he was once the lover torn,

The wicked witch was not always wicked,
Prince charming worries too much of his hair,
The charm behind it is an image,
And For the witch it was her lover who brought upon her despair


A good read, Fickle, I enjoyed the read.


Les


Re: Fairytales
Posted by: petersz (98.207.174.---)
Date: April 01, 2022 01:22AM

fickledlife,

this was the part I liked best;

The beautiful and the good...ha.
Its the good who are beautiful.


amo et avanti,

Peter


Re: Fairytales
Posted by: Fickledlife (72.130.17.---)
Date: April 03, 2022 11:52PM

my scheme is lacking on this one, but nonetheless, thanks for the commentary. always appreciated.

-with love




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