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Rain.
Posted by: Fickledlife (72.130.17.---)
Date: February 19, 2022 04:48PM

You just dont feel it right.

Wake up your nerves..

Feel it separately a million times.

A million drops at once.

Eyes closed,

still staring at the veiled skies.

Eyes closed.

You dont need to see it.

You can imagine its unchanging greyscale because its constant. 

.

.

You just dont feel it right.

Listen to its paradiddle under a blanket,

awake,

but sleep a visitor not too long ago departed.

Dont cringe at the thunder.

Dont shiver.

It too does not want to be seen a monster.

Embrace the song.

.

.

You just dont feel it right.

Wet clothes should bring a smile.

Content with the cold,

there should be a peace your outstretched hands.

What better place for an embrace?

.

.

You just dont feel it right.

The gentlest kiss with a tight embrace.

Wet hair covering their faces.

He hasnt seen her for a while.  

The pumping hearts dont have eyes,

dont hear with ears,

feel with hands,

dont taste with tongue,

but understand far better.

.

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You just dont feel it right. Let me teach you. (its not 'just rain')   

-with love

Edited 2 time(s). Last edit at 04/04/2022 03:46AM by Fickledlife.


Re: Rain.
Posted by: petersz (98.207.174.---)
Date: February 19, 2022 08:52PM

I like this.

Peter


Re: Rain.
Posted by: Fickledlife (72.130.17.---)
Date: February 19, 2022 09:30PM

Im glad. Your stuff , along with anothers, is the reason i like this sites forum so much.

-with love




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