User Submitted Poetry
 Interested in feedback about a piece you've written? 

eMule -> The Poetry Archive -> Forums -> User Submitted Poetry


Goto Thread: PreviousNext
Goto: Forum ListMessage ListNew TopicSearchLog In
I’ll Give You Back the Moon for My Confusion
Posted by: petersz (98.207.174.---)
Date: January 31, 2022 01:40AM

I’ll Give You Back the Moon for My Confusion

We walked across the bridge
Away from South Boston
The wind strong off the beach
Into our …no,
There were no missteps in you becoming you
Me becoming me…
Morning, The wind crisp. We sit by the fire.
You lean over, look toward the logs, stretch, the world flies off
Look Mars in ascendance, I think,
Dancing like a ghost over the arctic
And disappears
Into the moon… without a splash, red
Its black canopy.
The moon, ours, engulfs us in it circle, wakes me, breaks through the
Canopy. From its dark face, reflection,
Why call it light, the sill
But stars and light are worlds apart.
A black night retreats from the sparks. I’ll cut a window
Around my face
To hide the moon. What?
Electricity dissipates
Not like in plants…there is no detective here…
I don’t know what I’m doing again
Light grows anyway
In its weight.


Re: I’ll Give You Back the Moon for My Confusion
Posted by: les712 (68.116.92.---)
Date: February 07, 2022 02:44PM

A nice reflection, Peter, I enjoyed the read.

Les


Re: I’ll Give You Back the Moon for My Confusion
Posted by: petersz (98.207.174.---)
Date: February 08, 2022 03:27PM

Thanks, Les.




Sorry, only registered users may post in this forum.
This poetry forum at emule.com powered by Phorum.