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Late Afternoon
Posted by: petersz (67.174.198.---)
Date: January 06, 2022 07:38PM

Late Afternoon

There is no pathos in the air
Water birds sing to themselves
Nothing is said
The day is for listening


Re: Late Afternoon
Posted by: les712 (71.93.237.---)
Date: January 07, 2022 04:43AM

The day is for listening

And so is the night. Good one, Pete.


Les


Re: Late Afternoon
Posted by: petersz (98.207.174.---)
Date: January 07, 2022 08:58PM

Thanks, Les.


Re: Late Afternoon
Posted by: hpesoj (68.197.144.---)
Date: January 07, 2022 09:14PM

Of all the things that are, or could be, "in the air" on a given afternoon, why pathos? Curious...that's all.



Joe


Re: Late Afternoon
Posted by: petersz (98.207.174.---)
Date: January 09, 2022 01:47AM

Joe,

I'm contending with a bit of melancholia, so pathos seemed perfectly natural as an element of the air I breath these days.

cheers,

Peter


Re: Late Afternoon
Posted by: hpesoj (68.197.144.---)
Date: January 20, 2022 09:58PM

Well, perhaps this will cheer you up, Peter. This is an excellent poem, capturing your mood perfectly in its brevity.

Joe


Re: Late Afternoon
Posted by: petersz (98.207.174.---)
Date: January 21, 2022 12:53AM

Thanks Joe, on both counts.

amo,

Peter


Re: Late Afternoon
Posted by: drgeraldomagela (189.15.70.---)
Date: January 21, 2022 08:09PM

We have 2 ears for 1 mouth. It's to listen twice more than to speack. Let it be. Don't be afraid.


Re: Late Afternoon
Posted by: petersz (98.207.174.---)
Date: January 21, 2022 10:42PM

geraldo,

I hear you.

Peter




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