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Eclipse on the Winter Solstice
Posted by: petersz (67.174.198.---)
Date: December 21, 2021 03:43AM

Eclipse on the Winter Solstice

I went out moon
Watching – saw the sliver
Of the eclipse for three
Minutes: before
The clouds took the sky…
But I got to speak to
Three neighbors
I’d never seen.

A rare sighting.


Re: Eclipse on the Winter Solstice
Posted by: hpesoj (68.197.144.---)
Date: December 21, 2021 06:15PM

Peter:

Nice blending of the topical with the poetic. I especially like the double entendre in the last line.

Regards,

Joe


Re: Eclipse on the Winter Solstice
Posted by: petersz (67.174.198.---)
Date: December 24, 2021 01:31PM

Thanks, Joe.

It is strange when the ambiguity of experience is so explicit.

Peter




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