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PAPAI NOEL
Posted by: drgeraldomagela (189.41.122.---)
Date: December 05, 2021 10:46AM

smileys with beer


Attachments: Próspero Ano Novo..zip (3.1KB)  
Re: PAPAI NOEL
Posted by: drgeraldomagela (189.15.115.---)
Date: December 06, 2021 10:39AM

Legal.


Re: PAPAI NOEL
Posted by: les712 (68.185.64.---)
Date: December 06, 2021 11:41AM

Legal yes, convenient, no.

Les


Re: PAPAI NOEL
Posted by: drgeraldomagela (189.15.115.---)
Date: December 06, 2021 03:06PM

Convenient is the merchandizing way, not the Heart One.


Attachments: DUBAI.zip (2.8KB)  
Re: PAPAI NOEL
Posted by: les712 (68.185.64.---)
Date: December 07, 2021 04:11AM

Why not just post the poems directly without the zips?

Les


Re: PAPAI NOEL
Posted by: drgeraldomagela (189.15.115.---)
Date: December 07, 2021 09:03AM

Becouse I'd to write them all again, to do that - or not? I'm a newer in User Submitted Poetry tool. Please, teach me how to do that, without zip. I thank You, les.


Re: PAPAI NOEL
Posted by: les712 (68.185.64.---)
Date: December 07, 2021 10:01PM

Type your poem on your word processor, then cut and paste it here.


Les


Re: PAPAI NOEL
Posted by: drgeraldomagela (189.15.170.---)
Date: December 08, 2021 04:54PM

Let me try it


FAMILY

After months
no other day was more importaNt.
Motherhood was more initializeD,
The best thing that can happens foR a woman:
Another Person beeing materializEd!
Oh, God!... Bless You, God! A desire!...

Unifying the Beeings in The World,
Joining EveryOne,
It’s the GOD wIsh:
germans, japanesEs, brasilians... The World!
... and You aRe doIng that:
E N Z O

Oh!... He’s a wonderFull baby,
He begins other FamiLy, in this prEtty World!
After Him We’re Another PeRsons...
...more Graduated, is to be Nowadays.
Alá! Alá!...
...with an Angel liKe this Newborn,
We aRe on the Way Our Destiny...
... and Our GoAl is ThE Sky.
We’ll Must achieve The Sky!
Post Scriptum: BELIEVE THAT.


gema off
28/06/10

O.K., that's it. But it misses the colors that compound the acrostic form. See this Poem in www.medicinaholistica.eu, at the Page FAMILY.


Re: PAPAI NOEL
Posted by: petersz (67.174.198.---)
Date: December 14, 2021 02:19AM

I like the passion.

Peter




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