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anothere day
Posted by: duncancli (66.19.119.---)
Date: November 17, 2021 11:36AM

I believe in romances, and the truth of love.
Growing old together, staring at the stars above.
I believe in happiness‘ when all is lost,
The fear of losing and the price of its cost.
As its not found in silver and gold,
The depths of its riches but a mans soul.
No matter the price its paid in full,
Jesus my king my Lord who rules.
the purest of love is found in thee ,
My Lord my savior you are my plead.
Like the angles on earth, is this search in me.
far above my understanding is but a light I see,
my prayers on wings in a heavenly flight
of your love on the darkest of nights.


Re: anothere day
Posted by: les712 (68.185.64.---)
Date: December 01, 2021 06:28PM

Cliff, even though I don't quite understand the line below, I still enjoyed the read here.

My Lord my savior you are my plead.

Perhaps the line should read: ...my savior to you, I plead.


Les

Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 12/01/2022 06:28PM by les712.




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