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Translucent Leaves
Posted by: petersz (67.174.198.---)
Date: November 14, 2021 06:50PM

Translucent Leaves

The interior of other souls --
What I don’t know:

Sometimes
I write poems
From the outer chambers –

At best what I can glean from
Empathetic,
Derivative,
Experience –


Re: Translucent Leaves
Posted by: les712 (68.185.83.---)
Date: November 15, 2021 11:09AM

Nicely done, Peter, one of your better efforts of late.

Les


Re: Translucent Leaves
Posted by: petersz (67.174.198.---)
Date: November 15, 2021 09:37PM

Thanks, Les.




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