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Say Yes
Posted by: El Tiger (216.220.216.---)
Date: November 05, 2021 05:59PM

Open up your heart, Dear,
And let me come in.
Don't listen to what you hear
From the voices within.
You know you can trust me
To always be true,
And to always see
The best in you.
I cannot love you more
Than I already do.
Forgive me if I'm a bore,
But there's something I must do.
You're the most beautiful thing
I have ever met,
And if you accept this ring
You'll have seen nothing yet.


Re: Say Yes
Posted by: les712 (68.185.83.---)
Date: November 09, 2021 02:16AM

I like the positive tone of this poem, Tiger, welcome aboard.

Les




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