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Deciduous Days
Posted by: petersz (67.174.198.---)
Date: September 20, 2021 12:37AM

Deciduous Days

The wind beneath the ash
My growth among city streets
One ash leaf, no, two
Fallen in relief.

Look for the olives, lilacs,
Shadow on the mountain –
That dog, happy –
I knew they were good
Because the dog was always happy –
--small measure.

The world tree,
which grows through all the worlds,
appears to different cultures as different species of tree.
For example, the Norse had
the myth of Iggdrasil,
which was an ash tree.

We pick the fruit
On faded days
Becoming shadows ourselves.


Re: Deciduous Days
Posted by: petersz (67.174.198.---)
Date: September 20, 2021 12:41AM

Here's a drawing of Iggdrasil.


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Re: Deciduous Days
Posted by: les712 (68.185.83.---)
Date: September 23, 2021 03:56PM

Pete, nature is often rejuvenating in its effect on the human spirit as noted by many 19th century writers; Thoreau, and Wordsworth come to mind. Thinking about trees, which are the most obvious symbols of nature, leads us all to think also about our place on this planet and in the universe. I like the poem, Pete, nicely done.


Les


Re: Deciduous Days
Posted by: petersz (67.174.198.---)
Date: September 23, 2021 06:17PM

Thank you, Les, for providing some background for the poem. It is, for me, symbolic of how transitory, fleeting, our lives are, like the leaves falling from the trees in autumn...where I come from, in New England.

Peter


Re: Deciduous Days
Posted by: les712 (68.185.83.---)
Date: September 23, 2021 07:43PM

It is, for me, symbolic of how transitory, fleeting, our lives are, like the leaves falling from the trees...

So true.

Les




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