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we make it difficult
Posted by: frost42_24 (67.160.36.---)
Date: September 09, 2021 02:06PM

the whole lot is lost.
frantic
disillusioned
and despite being part
of the collective
feel alone

struggling for position
overwhelmed
then underwhelmed
and waning after time
from any good thing
they find-

from any good thing I find...


Re: we make it difficult
Posted by: petersz (67.174.198.---)
Date: September 11, 2021 02:07AM

aye, but beauty is difficult, the old poet repeats to himself, canto after canto.

nice oiece,

Peter


Re: we make it difficult
Posted by: frost42_24 (32.174.164.---)
Date: September 11, 2021 03:16AM

thanks Peter...the human condition....ahhh




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