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LoVe is ForGing CrYstaLs
Posted by: Rosela (121.54.32.---)
Date: September 06, 2021 09:34AM

With him beside you... as each tear breaks off the slope of your jaw, it falls into the waiting palm of his hand. And in his fist, all hurts are clenched into vapors of fading wisps of half-remembered nightmares, unable to touch you.

Unable to even graze the edges of the breathless pounding of the sensibly ignorant heart...

Unable to even brush against the rapidly jolting twists of the quirking complications of a broken mind...


And as his fingers unfold in the agony he has absorbed into himself, a blazing crystal of repressed troubles...

Of pressures and pains...

Sits peacefully in the center of a tortured palm, glowing softly....



With the radiance of selfless devotion.


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Re: LoVe is ForGing CrYstaLs
Posted by: petersz (67.174.198.---)
Date: September 11, 2021 02:12AM

Rosela,

the emotions and the psychology of your writing are intriguing, et al.

Stay with it, the writing and the life that feeds into it.

Cheers,

Peter


Re: LoVe is ForGing CrYstaLs
Posted by: Rosela (112.200.213.---)
Date: September 11, 2021 02:36AM

thanks peter. hope to talk with you one time. smiling smiley


Re: LoVe is ForGing CrYstaLs
Posted by: petersz (67.174.198.---)
Date: September 20, 2021 12:25AM

anytime


Re: LoVe is ForGing CrYstaLs
Posted by: secretmae (203.87.178.---)
Date: December 01, 2021 06:48PM

I love your poem, what a relaxing to hear and every details was so meaningful. I hope, I can make that kind of poem. Good luck.

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Re: LoVe is ForGing CrYstaLs
Posted by: hpesoj (68.197.144.---)
Date: December 04, 2021 02:42PM

Nicely written with strong, meaningful imagery. I look forward to more of your writing.

Joe


Re: LoVe is ForGing CrYstaLs
Posted by: Rosela (112.210.246.---)
Date: December 05, 2021 02:22AM

thank you so much everyone.... but this is actually the second half of "death is a Warm blanket" do read it... its meant to be read in sequence... thanks again smiling smiley


Re: LoVe is ForGing CrYstaLs
Posted by: jannypan (216.127.176.---)
Date: March 02, 2022 09:23PM

I love your poem, what a relaxing to hear and every details was so meaningful. I hope, I can make that kind of poem. Good luck.Cheap MapleStory Gold
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