I painted you like an artist
in my mind

stoic by intent
and paraded with defenses

captured perfectly
in a moment

where I could hold you all my life
and call it art

frosty,

You are so mean.

Peter

Peter, I'm harmless...

Beautifully done, Sherry.

Les

thanks, Les.

Yeah, your poem is an art, even though it was too short, but the meaning of this are here. Hope you can make more.

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I call it (your poem) art, as well.

Joe

i actually love this one. i love it that its short. fact is there was probably no better way than to end it right when you felt you had to. dragging it on would have dimmed the impact. bravo.

I loved this poem.

thanks for all the feedback. I'm glad some people got some enjoyment out of it. I appreciate you taking the time to read it.