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retro
Posted by: frost42_24 (67.160.36.---)
Date: September 01, 2021 11:48PM
the season brushes through me
cool
crisp like the night
I fell with you
delightful gray skies
and hearts
hand held
full of promises
we knew we'd never keep...
Re: retro
Posted by: petersz (67.174.198.---)
Date: September 03, 2021 12:08AM
frosty,
'with' is a great word...perfect for the moment you portray.
Peter
Re: retro
Posted by: les712 (66.189.173.---)
Date: September 09, 2021 11:40AM
Nicely done, you've captured the essence of the moment beautifully. Many developing poets write tons without saying as much as this.
Les
Re: retro
Posted by: frost42_24 (67.160.36.---)
Date: September 09, 2021 01:30PM
Les,
thanks for the support. I've just been in a long long funk and am trying to start writing something again...
Re: retro
Posted by: petersz (67.174.198.---)
Date: September 20, 2021 12:34AM
Frosty,
We are all eager for you to get back on the horse, considering the years of interesting stuff you've posted here.
amo,
Peter
Re: retro
Posted by: frost42_24 (67.160.36.---)
Date: September 27, 2021 02:13AM
Peter, you're too kind.
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