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SHUT YOUR EYES
Posted by: Rosela (121.54.32.---)
Date: August 23, 2021 10:59AM

Shut your eyes in beautiful agony.

Hold on tightly in disconsolate embrace.

Perceive each moment in absolute empathy.

Stumble through love in absurd grace.

Shut your mouth in reticent desires.

Hold on gingerly in subtle desperation.

Perceive each hour in a pain which inspires.

Stumble surely through dreams without limitation.




Shut it.

Hold it.

Perceive it.

Let yourself fall.




Shut it.

Hold it.

Perceive it.

Savor it all.



Shut your heart in fierce denial.

Hold on serenely in gaudy movement.

Perceive each action as anything other than trivial.

Stumble confidently through life-altering moments.




Shut it.

Hold it.

Perceive it.

Let yourself fall.




Shut it.

Hold it.

Perceive it.

Savor it all.




Enfold each sadness in muscled arms and fisted palms…

Take failure into the heart and let it dissolve into the most stalwart of blood…

Bequeath the bare body to each solitude in simpering limbs…









And you will cease to be alone.

--- <3 Rosela


Re: SHUT YOUR EYES
Posted by: frost42_24 (67.160.36.---)
Date: August 31, 2021 01:07AM

I really enjoyed this one.


Re: SHUT YOUR EYES
Posted by: Rosela (121.54.32.---)
Date: August 31, 2021 08:19AM

thank you so much for your encouragement... will post more. smiling smiley thank you . thank you.


Re: SHUT YOUR EYES
Posted by: petersz (67.174.198.---)
Date: September 01, 2021 05:57AM

I can only try to encourage you to post more, write more, keep at it,

avanti,

Peter


Re: SHUT YOUR EYES
Posted by: Rosela (112.203.170.---)
Date: September 02, 2021 12:50AM

gracias. smiling smiley will be posting as long as someone is reading. smiling smiley




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