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Aeschylus on the Rebound
Posted by: petersz (67.174.198.---)
Date: August 01, 2021 08:51PM

Aeschylus on the Rebound

Speak to yourself
See the visions of your silence
Trust the voice
That listens to you

Ache, air, wind and remorse
There are no drugs for the mind
No drugs for the mind
The mind is free
Give it the day’s crust
Before the emptiness drowns out
Nearby

Look to the random
British poets from the 80s
Alan Jackson Jay
Ramsay Lotte
Moos
I can hear the Angels burning
Will no one help
The widow’s son?

Vexed to nightmare
I cannot stifle excess tears
From false emotion
Cannot meet pain with pain
Distracted, vulnerable
Ready to go


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Re: Aeschylus on the Rebound
Posted by: les712 (71.93.237.---)
Date: August 12, 2021 12:34PM

A good read Peter, I especially like this part:

There are no drugs for the mind
No drugs for the mind
The mind is free
Give it the day’s crust
Before the emptiness drowns out

Les


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