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"bene"
Posted by: petersz (67.174.198.---)
Date: July 16, 2021 04:55PM

"bene"

I.

Sun. Sun. Sun.
Here it comes.

Tell me, in which line
Do I put the dragon?

II.

Rain

Wash
Porcelain tile
Lions
By the marina

The walk
Into imagination
Or
Universal Jews
Melting
Into conversation

Cool warmth
Enlivened

III.

MAKE IT NEW
The old Chinese emperor
wrote on his bath tub
MAKE IT NEW
everyday
That is how I remember it
From Pound’s account

And this morning
That is how I feel it
MAKE IT NEW
Today at least
It doesn’t have to be
Anything drastic

I do not have to be another person
--just be here today.

Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 07/17/2010 02:34AM by petersz.


Re: "bene"
Posted by: jr kruydenhof (199.0.83.---)
Date: July 17, 2021 07:04AM

thanks man I veel you. I do not have to be another person
--just be here today


Re: "bene"
Posted by: petersz (67.174.198.---)
Date: July 18, 2021 02:29AM

Thanks jr
and thanks to John Lennon
and Jill Immerman
and Ezra Pound

it may be that all poetry is among friends,
at least that is how I feel tonight.

amo and avanti,

Peter




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