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Don't Ask Why
Posted by: Ascendant (70.66.26.---)
Date: June 30, 2021 01:28AM

My first post on here... Please tell me what you think.


I’m dreaming Of always having you by my side

I am dreaming Of being beside you day and night

Yes I was yours but you are not mine

Yet I’m still yours but don’t ask why

Don’t ask why

-

I feel the burn and I always yearn

To be by your side

And don’t ask why

I feel the hurt yet I’ll never learn

To just let it slide

Please don’t ask why

-

My life was in line and I don’t know why

You left my side when I was about to die

You’ve got no reasons why I hurt inside

And my heart is yours but don’t ask why

Just don’t ask why

-

I feel the burn and I always yearn

To be by your side

And don’t ask why

I feel the hurt yet I’ll never learn

To just let it slide

Please don’t ask why

-

I feel the pain just like you would

You left me here just like you should

I am yours and I know you could

Always be mine but don’t ask why

Please don’t ask why

-

I feel the burn and I always yearn

To be by your side

And don’t ask why

I feel the hurt yet I’ll never learn

To just let it slide

Please don’t ask why

No don’t ask why

Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 06/30/2010 01:33AM by Ascendant.


Re: Don't Ask Why
Posted by: Ascendant (70.66.26.---)
Date: June 30, 2021 01:29AM

don't know why it put all those extra spaces between lines, and when I try to fix it the whole thing turns into one big paragraph. Confuses me.


Re: Don't Ask Why
Posted by: les712 (68.116.92.---)
Date: June 30, 2021 02:48PM

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My life was in line and I don’t know why
You left my side when I was about to die
You’ve got no reasons why I hurt inside
And my heart is yours but don’t ask why
Just don’t ask why

-

I feel the burn and I always yearn
To be by your side
And don’t ask why
I feel the hurt yet I’ll never learn
To just let it slide
Please don’t ask why

-

I feel the pain just like you would
You left me here just like you should
I am yours and I know you could
Always be mine but don’t ask why
Please don’t ask why

-

I feel the burn and I always yearn
To be by your side
And don’t ask why
I feel the hurt yet I’ll never learn
To just let it slide
Please don’t ask why
No don’t ask why


Re: Don't Ask Why
Posted by: Ascendant (70.66.26.---)
Date: June 30, 2021 11:39PM

Thanks Les... still don't know why it did that in the first place though.


Re: Don't Ask Why
Posted by: Creepy (216.220.216.---)
Date: July 01, 2021 01:42PM

I promise I aint gonna ask why




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