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Dumbed down by Brian John Evans
Posted by: brianjohnevans (121.98.231.---)
Date: June 19, 2022 04:58PM

Dumbed down by Brian John Evans

our cars are black-

our people are fat-

the fat wear black to mask the fat;

the roads are black-

car windows are black-

sunglasses are black-

so to save blackened life-

we must paint the roads white.

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Re: Dumbed down by Brian John Evans
Posted by: les712 (68.116.90.---)
Date: June 19, 2022 06:26PM



That's dumb alright.

Les


Re: Dumbed down by Brian John Evans
Posted by: les712 (68.116.90.---)
Date: June 19, 2022 06:27PM

we must paint the roads white

That's dumb alright.

Les




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