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what now?
Posted by: frost42_24 (67.185.64.---)
Date: June 10, 2022 12:14AM

the perilous distance
we travel
to midlife mania
towards reconstructed youth

clinging to a dream state
with joy bound frames
in sight
but slightly out of focus

oh, disenchanted-
straddled between youth and tombstone
strong and defiant
but far less limber

still hope full and trickling
down the sides
making puddles at the feet
of indecision

Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 06/10/2021 12:16AM by frost42_24.


Re: what now?
Posted by: petersz (24.7.60.---)
Date: June 10, 2022 02:02PM

We get through, though, don't we, even if we have to muddle our ways into 'old age'?


Re: what now?
Posted by: frost42_24 (67.185.64.---)
Date: June 10, 2022 02:19PM

indeed, we do, Peter. I used to think the concept of a mid life crisis was just BS...but as I enter the 40s, I am starting to reconsider...hehe. Life does keep getting better though everything doesn't work or look like it used to.


Re: what now?
Posted by: les712 (68.116.81.---)
Date: June 10, 2022 05:26PM

Midlife, is itself an artificial construction. Midlife for me or you, may not have been midlife for John Wooden, or George Burns. Though, I do like any poem which explores the struggles we face at any phase of human existence. Nicely done, Frosty, I enjoyed this one.

Les


Re: what now?
Posted by: frost42_24 (67.185.64.---)
Date: June 10, 2022 06:23PM

Les, I agree. it's a man made concept and one I've never put much stock in. Just some thoughts on the idea. Self assessment and taking a stock of our life is a daily journey smiling smiley


Re: what now?
Posted by: hpesoj (69.116.241.---)
Date: June 10, 2022 06:46PM

I can't speak for everyone past 50, but I'm as good, if not better, than I ever was....in my mind, anyway. I'm with Les on this one; nice presentation of one of our human struggles.

Joe


Re: what now?
Posted by: frost42_24 (67.185.64.---)
Date: June 10, 2022 06:51PM

Joe, I'm glad to hear that you're better than ever! As I said earlier, I do feel that life just keeps getting better.

thanks for your feedback too.




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