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Red Hot Cheeseburgers
Posted by: AngelsFear (210.4.62.---)
Date: May 16, 2022 11:28AM

Poetry I is what I do best
- so I think.
Quantity exposed,
bared,
emptied my thoughts
like Global Warming emptied
the reservoir of electricity.

No matter how wanting,
It wills itself to futility,
uniformity... toxic.


Re: Red Hot Cheeseburgers
Posted by: petersz (24.7.60.---)
Date: May 16, 2022 12:22PM

ouch.

Peter


Re: Red Hot Cheeseburgers
Posted by: les712 (68.116.94.---)
Date: May 18, 2022 01:10AM

the reservoir of electricity


I like that phrase, good poem AF.


Les




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